Beloved Poem by Sahar Sahar

Beloved



beloved!
you run in my blood
in my soul
i feel this every time
when i breathe

i survive in your love embrace
and beyond that
i can see
in my dreams
and with my opened eyes
till i forget my name

when my tears mean
a growing passion
i feel something different
than the silence
and more than that
i can feel the eternity

as the love still lives
when every part of the
life is dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 05 August 2010

beloved! you run in my blood in my soul i feel this every time when i breathe wow what a sweet start of rich and great poem.. the whole poem and its stanzas are perfectly done with romantic way.. lovely write with meanngful idea..loved it..well done dear sahar

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Real love, passionate poem! In your biography you say you hope you`ll write better. Go for it! Such a passion can only guide you to the right path. Best wishes, Laura

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veronique buea pre 25 July 2010

i love it, it the same feelings when i was with my bf someone its gone 4ever!

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