John Kipling Lewis

Rookie (3/12/1968 / Manhattan, KS)

Birchous Slender Felted Cove. - Poem by John Kipling Lewis

birchous slender felted cove.
knock tick-tock a cocking load.
ferrous crafted hafted shout.
fibrous clotted sauna spout.
splendorous pollack petal spray.
emancipating conscious grey.
whisper marbled vented cruft.
slumping silent scented snuff.

Comments about Birchous Slender Felted Cove. by John Kipling Lewis

  • Rookie K Holoholo (11/5/2007 9:29:00 PM)

    Very amusing and I like it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kath Moore (11/5/2007 2:07:00 PM)

    7. Decent so far in a 'Jabberwocky'-ish way. To make it better, read it out loud - there are some places where the meter trips or is otherwise off. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian Beek (11/5/2007 12:28:00 PM)

    REALLY like this one.... and I did read it aloud and liked it even more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Donna Robertson (8/3/2007 6:40:00 PM)

    My favorite so far. Innovative use of words - I have read this one before, and each time I read it, I am fascinated by the different mental images it brings up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Lewis (3/1/2006 12:31:00 PM)

    this poem is meant to be read aloud (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 24, 2006

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