Your Lips. Poem by John Kipling Lewis

Your Lips.

Rating: 3.7


Your lips are like feathers
parted by words.
I feel their brush on my neck.
My toes grip.
My spine coils.
I hold my breath, my voice escapes.
A chill and a flame.
I open my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 06 November 2007

It's OK but it surely is not my favorite.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

5. It's good that you're trying to use images. The ones you're using aren't particularly original or striking though.

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Marie K 10 August 2007

Sexy. One false step and this one coulda been just a cheap floozy.

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Gina Onyemaechi 24 February 2006

Sensual and delicious, John. You've got me licking my lips! Pleased to meet you. Gina.

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

Manhattan, KS
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