As you walk along the road
and the black mist passes you
it becomes dark
your mind blank
you get scared
yet you keep walking
but it just gets darker
then a light it gets closer
then its gone
gone forever
you never see light again
interesting piece indeed, I like short and to the point pieces, probably cause I have a hard time writing them.
The poem is well written, and i like it. The message of the poem is enough to express what life's journey all about- the how we live life. To face the who and the what we are is not easy it will couse us pain or even rejection but the truth is, lfe is up and down, night and say till we pass through the door of death to life. Black Mist is a reality...at times we are lost, life seems no meaning at all, but love my friend will bring us back to the light; faith my friend will guide us to right path; hope my friend for what is before us is a challenge on how to savor life's beauty.
It is like to give up all hopes but yes, black mist everywhere and perhaps we never see light again.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
good poem its dark........