Lucifera Santez

Rookie - 234 Points (4th feb / Belize)

Black Roses - Poem by Lucifera Santez

Color of darkness,
Hue of sorrow,
Shade of pain,
Embodied in that bloom,
One that he has
Created from his tears,
From his blood,
For her,
Only for her,
In remembrance of their
Broken promises,
Blooming in his garden,
The flowers of dead love,
Adorned with the scars
Of a shattered heart,
Flourish those black roses.

Comments about Black Roses by Lucifera Santez

  • Silver Star - 3,076 Points C. P. Sharma (10/13/2015 6:36:00 AM)

    I appreciate your lovely ingenuity in images. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,314 Points Ken E Hall (2/8/2014 4:39:00 AM)

    original poem how love can be turned into a black void seen as a black rose with shades of pain well done indeed...regards (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,513 Points Tony Karas (12/1/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    Whooooaaaaaa! Powerful! Girl.... you are awesome! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,968 Points Roseann Shawiak (12/1/2013 3:03:00 AM)

    Love your expression of dead love. It's dark with a lot of meaning. I especially liked the last line: the flowers of dead love, adorned with the scars of a shattered heart, flourish those black roses. Keep writing. Thank you for your comment on my poem: Being Bereft, I greatly appreciated it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (10/4/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    Excellent Lucifera. Loved it. Have rated your poem.

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  • Rookie Zandile Zoya (9/23/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    what a true story bhind those beautiful lines..... I like, i like, i like, i like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/22/2013 9:22:00 AM)

    Very nice poem and well penned too...loved it: -) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,536 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (8/22/2013 3:10:00 AM)

    Colour of darkness.... lovely beggining to a sad piece of work. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,776 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/20/2013 4:49:00 AM)

    OUCH, this is sad. But it affects the reader in me, so you are good at it.
    And the love between them was turned into broken promises
    (sigh) anyway, another good write from you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/18/2013 1:42:00 PM)

    Ah! ! This a very good write Ma'am! I really enjoyed! Black roses! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (8/18/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    oh...i'll remember ur poem whenever i see a black roes after this...lovely. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Subarna Chakraborty (8/17/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    It's an good love poem, an awesome poetic expression that you have.Brilliant! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,685 Points Hazel Durham (8/15/2013 8:32:00 AM)

    A sad story beautifully written with such passion and understanding at his pain and sorrow! !
    Superb wtite! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,717 Points Valerie Dohren (8/14/2013 2:15:00 PM)

    Black roses symbolizing love that has died - very imaginative, and a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/14/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    what a perfect imagery of your black roses
    your words so amazing even this is a sadness poem
    brilliant..! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (8/14/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    Actually black roses are red roses thaf have a darker red pigment. But how fitting a red rose to signify one's love for someone and a black rose (red) for love that has wronged. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,202 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/14/2013 11:33:00 AM)

    The flowers of dead love,
    Adorned with the scars
    Of a shattered heart,
    Flourish those black roses.

    Beautiful lines! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gleb Zavlanov (8/14/2013 10:57:00 AM)

    This is amazing! I really liked the imagery and words you used to create a sad and sorrowful atmosphere. Nice job. Also, thank you for commenting. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 197 Points Karen Gonzalez-videla (8/14/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    Incredible :) This poem is written with so much passion that it makes you read it again and again :) You really do have a brilliant talent inside you :) This is simply magnificent. I don't have enough words to describe it :) Never stop writing in your life! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,497 Points Unwritten Soul (8/14/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    Your black roses has crimson blood you know tht? _Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013

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