Blackbirds (For Smoky And Patti) Poem by Eric Cockrell

Blackbirds (For Smoky And Patti)

Rating: 3.5


blackbirds...
the spindly children
of blood red skies,
walking barefooted
on the dusty path,
cawing!
demons?
no, the demons
walk upright with
sharpened swords,
cutting the tongues
from the beaks,
breaking wings
with moral hammers!
blackbirds...
spirits set out,
left to dandelion clinging,
and morsels of bread
thrown out by
those who belch rules...
spirits,
that die to fly,
to taste forbidden clouds,
cawing!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 03 November 2013

Not strange Eric, mystifyingly beautiful. Thank you. Now, write some more... please!

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Eric Cockrell 30 March 2012

perhaps a strange response... but you both made me think!

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