Blind Love Poem by kite remedy

Blind Love

Rating: 5.0


I walked the path,
in which I'd lost my sight.
Between yesterday and today,
flowers weren't blooming much alike.
If only the Moon saw me
and how much I'd lost to strive and be,
would it intensify its light or would it pity me?

Up above, the beautiful stars,
thousands, but were wholly out of my sight.
For me, days was dark as night,
for always, as if it were a birth-mark.
'Light' was only a word,
just a meaning everyone uttered.
I would never understand,
of it and of what is the beauty, to the world, it sends..

I wandered alone, contemplating,
in the verge of reality,
as well as dream.
Has it been you
whose scent brought me a hope or two?
So far I drifted away,
so many dream I felt unchained.
Out of my eyelids and eyes,
you awakened me to stride..

I knew I was blind and restrained,
by hatred and by light so, I thought I was betrayed.
Nevertheless then,
as I met you, I knew where would my heart land.
Even though I couldn't see it,
you were always there to be,
and to guide,
this forever blinded eyes to comprehend 'Light..'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 23 November 2008

Absolutely poignant and great!

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asma Jone 03 December 2008

Your an great poet, love this so much....Like the way you described things really creative.

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Anjali Sinha 01 December 2008

beautiful like a song -10 anjali

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Naru Kaede 29 November 2008

This poem is very beautiful, , I just think, you can keep blind because you're lover guide you, But if they're not guide you, like as you're wish? ? Hehehe, , just my oppinion, , This is the beautiful one, , love it... Regards, , Naru Kaede, ,

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Joseph Poewhit 24 November 2008

Poem has a depth of loves feelings

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very nice poem.. i love how you expressed your feelings into it thank you for sharing Krista

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