Life is moving as per your ordained role
Steps are following the path as directed by your might
But still there are prayers for thou grace
Never awaken us for hatred, jealous, anger and greed
Never there be a day of fight for a piece of land
With my neighbour nor any one of the clan
Never to dwarf any one to raise my hand
Never to be a part of whirlwind
Forced to ignore the smiles of loved one
Empower us with wisdom and strength
Could move on the path of love and co-existence.
Oh lord, bless our life as you have blessed the flower
Admired as a bud, loved when blossomed
Respected till the last petal is dropped on the ground
powerful language and good feel.....Keep up the good work, sir
A nice piece of peom. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.
I like this poem. It really is a good poem about the life which is blistful. Like it.
Santosh, I like this poem very much. I like the title a lot. Somehow all of us want a blissful life but why so few of us want to live according to the priniciples that bring about a blissful life. You very well outlined some fo these prinicples in this fantastic poem. The end of the poem is really touching my heart. So nicely said. Congrats, Santosh. A masterpiece.
The general idea of the poem is absolutely great. However, I feel as if your poems are translated into English. I might be wrong! Still, I think you are a very sensitive person capable of expressing yourself very eloquently. Keep up the good work! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful prayer, Santosh, a delight and a heart felt write