Prayers To Thou Might Poem by Santosh Sharma

Prayers To Thou Might

Rating: 5.0


Prayers To Thou Might


When the truth starts sinking
in the majority of un awakened souls
When the love is made for the
reasons and needs
When the humanity starts strangulating
Of it’s own conduct and deeds
Inner self starts looking for seclusion and solitude
Oh, Creator and Director of this drama
Change the Script and role of your puppets
Before the drama could take a tragic course.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 02 February 2011

sure we are all playing different roles assigned to us by God Almighty. a nice write.

0 0 Reply
Jenny Gordon 02 February 2011

Beautiful, yet disturbing, since it seems to verily be a prayer to our Creator, but as such seems rather blasphemous, for while 'puppeteer' seems very true, yet it is not, according to the Word of God. Excellent and fascinatingly nearly perfect assessment of our situation.

0 0 Reply
Juan Olivarez 04 February 2011

Very deep and thoughtful refrain.

0 0 Reply
Lynn Glover 04 February 2011

Unfortunately the drama has already taken a bad turn, however, we can always depend on God to straighten out this drama for the best. It is He and only Him that can handle this world today.

0 0 Reply
Romeo Della Valle 06 February 2011

A thought provoking write. Very deep and well penned and spiritually moving! 10+++Keep it up! Love and Peace for always...

0 0 Reply
Terence George Craddock 17 February 2011

'Oh, Creator and Director of this drama Change the Script and role of your puppets Before the drama could take a tragic course.' The script has a mighty purpose but puppets must dance on choice string humanity was given free choice greed is but one demon seed power ring only when key commandments are obeyed do civilizations freedom sing. An interesting poem, raising the question, where is 'Proof Of Divine Obedience'?

0 0 Reply
Pranab K Chakraborty 16 February 2011

Good writing. Time is high perhaps, inner eye should be opened quickly otherwise the civilization will go thousand feet deep under the ground perhaps. Thank you for your believe on Powerful almighty. Regards, pranab

0 0 Reply
Unwritten Soul 12 February 2011

Living in the circus of life, we should know the role we played...God give a freedom to choose destiny and God has right to wrapped it for fate, chances is given for us to change..This writing is purely good reminder for all...the peace, the voice is make the poem really stand as it now :) - Prayers always listened by God...like it - Unwritten Soul

0 0 Reply
Mohammad Muzzammil 10 February 2011

Nice poem indeed. Your poem presents the truth and each word hold deep message. Of course, we are nothing before Him just like puppets. Our whole life and destiny itself is the creation of His. Thanks for nice thoughts.

0 0 Reply
Audrey Heller 10 February 2011

Your thoughts here, go very deep and make for a very good write! The whole world, is in turmoil and it would be wonderful, if we'd have peace reign, so we all could have less, to be concerned about.10

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success