It’s not easy to shed
Blood instead of tears
It takes along time to
Get what is destined
You have to eat agony
And drink pain
From the day you’re born
Months by months
Night and day
When there are no tears left
To cry by yourself
When it’s not in your fate
Not even to fall in love
As a fake
When your heart wailed
A painful cry
And your soul wants to
Fly up above high
Then the blood rolls down
Instead of tears
Blood instead of tears- intense imagery! Still you have a why to live. Otherwise you could not write such moving poetry. Sincerely, William
A sad write of a lonely tortured life.As we struggle day to day to survive and happiness refuses to show it's face to us. You penned this well, it had nice flow and excellent wording. A good write of a sad but realistic existence. Well done my friend. Keep up the great reads, .
a very touchy poem............ it touched my heart and soul. but you sounded very sad and in pain. Eid mubarak to you and your family.
An intriguing piece; personally, I prefer punctuation for smoother grammatical flow; when we apply God's Word & Principles to our lives, we are to be more than conquerors, so that we can more free shed tears of joy, rather than the blood from toiling. Be blessed and keep writing! -Joe
Masterly written although I do not agree with all the things you have said. A sudden severe shock or failure may also trigger the desire to shed blood So 9 for this piece.
Very sad indeed is man's life. A very miserable write. U get 10++
The trauma gyrating that I enjoy seeing as Inseperable indeed sorrow and joy untill death he or she. your expression fine! I am on line! giving u 10 vote-shine!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's a great write. Peace out, Lexi Baby