Boat Poem by Asif Baloch
Boat
A boat with so
Many tiny holes
Struggling to reach
Its destination
But unable to float
Winds of feelings
Are blowing in rage
Waves of thoughts
Are slapping with
So much hate
Water is flooding in
Slowly, slowly
Scaring and terrifying
The passengers
Onboard
I understand this one whether it is literal or a metaphor. So, Ibgave it an 8. I don't care which it is. GW62
the true plight of the 'life boat'...beautifully descriptive... short well meaning phrases...good write, Asif 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/11/2024 3:44:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Very nice imagery...