Blow A Whistle! Build A Castle! A Dolly Bird Sizzles In My Soul! Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Blow A Whistle! Build A Castle! A Dolly Bird Sizzles In My Soul!

Rating: 4.8


A simple gaze at the lips she bears – rounded letter “O” hails!
I just amaze at figure she wears – a grand victory of the letter “V” in styles;
A simple stare at bosom of my lady– red hot – a curved letter “U” howls!
A simple glare at the face of my lady – a new moon – a letter “C” feels;
Yet I like her ethereal beauty - her soul – of holy letter “H”, I love.
Blow a whistle! Build a castle! A a dolly bird sizzles in my soul!

I haven't seen you since a month – just I feel ages gone by!
You’ve gone out of sight; my heart beats without light in the sea,
In your absence I sleep like a cat, I talk like a rat, I don't why!
So I went to Kashmir in search of beauty in a single duty,
I rushed back with a sigh without you - oh, cute bug of beauty!
Blow a whistle! Build a castle! A dolly bird sizzles in my soul!

I'm just a dreamer; you are my schemer – oh, knockout cutie! Love....
You are my Venus; you are my music drummer – oh, red-hot beauty! Love...
You're my Atlas - hold me up like a world map – oh, smashing hottie! Love....
You’re my Barbie toy; you’re my bundle of joy – oh, dancing smartie! Love...
You’re my pot of gold – hold up my life’s cap – oh, ravishing sweetie! Love...
Blow a whistle! Build a castle! A dolly bird sizzles in my soul!

Hello! I wrote your name on a slate – Bet, I’m a happy fellow,
Lo! My little niece sue rubbed it in a hurry – tut left me in a worry;
Hello! I wrote your name on the sands and rested on my pillow,
Oh my god! Tides with a roar washed it before I reach in a flurry, I'm sorry;
Ho! I wrote it my heart with a love fruit – don’t run away I will die, oh my love.
Blow a whistle! Build a castle! A dolly bird sizzles in my soul!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 03 November 2011

Great poem. Liked it. Good write.

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Queeny Gona 13 October 2013

Lovely read. Diction ran through the poem is amazing!

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Hmmm thank you friend...

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 15 July 2012

rhythmic, rejoicing, lovable spirits..............the ink of your thoughts!

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 25 February 2012

beautiful love poem with good light emotions)

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Jacqui Broad 24 November 2011

I love this poem! Your love poems are always so playful! It always sounds like fun! You have a nice playground in your mind.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you Jacqueline Broad for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Crimson Love 04 November 2011

Your words have a very light, and playful tone to them, I enjoy it a lot, This poem flows together exceptionally! :)

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for an excellent comment....

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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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