Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Bronze Star - 5,558 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Blue Moon Haiku


Alluring Goddess

reigns over water and trees

witnessed reflection

Submitted: Thursday, October 23, 2008

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  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/24/2011 6:28:00 PM)

    Happens once in a blue moon in the life of Satan who devours the moon thinking he to be the alluring Goddess undercover.Saturn remained gay forever and only your words satiate him in eclipses of life as it does for us readers.Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/9/2009 8:17:00 PM)

    Alluring Goddess

    reigns over water and trees

    witnessed reflection.. short poem but big and impressive messagae.. well done dear...10

    read mine moon, inflamed mind and i could hear (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (4/4/2009 4:49:00 PM)

    A splendid image of the moon expressed in your lines! Thanks for sharing.
    Best wishes.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ria Villaflor (2/26/2009 12:17:00 PM)

    Great piece. I love reading three line haiku. This is one of the best for me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pink Butterfly ... (2/10/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    An awesome piece! lovely words with deep meanings. Fantastic! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (11/5/2008 11:28:00 AM)

    In three lines
    the mystry of life
    is defined......10
    very beautiful & deep write....i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (11/2/2008 7:02:00 PM)

    A lot of meaning in such little words great job
    Please take some time to read some of my poems try everyone turns away and all my life. I would be pleased if you have time to read even more i hope you enjoy them as much as i enjoyed yours. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (10/31/2008 7:22:00 AM)

    a perfect setting for a surreal experience (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Kamran Haider (10/29/2008 12:35:00 AM)

    wow... a myth in three smart lines... Great vision and style... Loved it... (Report) Reply

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