Searching words in puzzle mazes
Guessing letters in cryptic phrases
Solving clues across and down
Mixing jumbles with pronouns
All her statements contradicting
Making promises, seldom sticking
Nixing kisses with odd looks
All caught up in romance books
Cold as ice yet sweet as wine
Faking sick but feeling fine
Duping me with pouty lips
Baiting me in Freudian slips
Strange how she can pull me in
Cheating me so she can win
Switching sides of my heart
Turning tides like Bonaparte
Always reason to battle wits
Sometimes prone to passive fits
Nothing ever simply stated
Everything all complicated
Yes I think you are attracted to someone. You said in this poem. Funny kind of poem it is very unique. I like it very much. Take care.
This one is a very creative and fun poem to read Brian. I love how you keep the comparisons related throughout your poem, that is hard to do! Great poem thank you
You definitely captured this, however love games are very dangerous games to play.--Melvina--
i know this game. it's never fun, and no-one wins. lovely way to capture it all with words though. nice job.: -) Virginie
That's why we love them! And when you finally work it out and think you've captured her heart for sure, that's exactly when you'll lose it. It's the sweetest game. Great representative wordplay.Clever, clear and concise.
dump her and take me! just kidding, brian - i like how my tongue works when telling this one. great craft!
hey brian.. this is an interesting poem...cleverly penned... excellent! Asma...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The complexities of a female mind exposed - the frustration oozed out of this one Brian. Loved the strength of the rhyme and metre, seemed to echo the thoughts ticking over in the narrator's mind. Warmest wishes, Justine.