Sizzling thoughts
Baked in burning skulls
Sliced and served
In salvers white,
Before starving minds!
Back to this diamond, great joy to read it again and again, so simple and so short, able to hold the imagery of hundred tons of paper that a man with pleasure may devore page after page during a lifetime. Brilliant share, thank you!
Books are the best friends......................................liked this poem.
A few years ago reading books was an integral part of life but now electronic books has reduced it's importance. still books are playing a very important role in our lives. A nice short poem.
Sizzling thoughts Baked in burning skulls Sliced and served In salvers white, Before starving minds! ......fantastic expression on a metaphorical base. Wonderful imaginary. Marvelous poem.
Brilliant write, books would be like a buffet, but sizzling thoughts baked and sliced served to starving minds would I think be more like poems like this beautiful petite five-liner. But it is subjective.
When I was young, I loved to read but could not afford the books, now that they are readily available in the net, my eyes are giving me trouble. This is a gem Valsa, Thanks
Highly imaginative write. As e books are published, there is less demands in general books. Beautifully crafted.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i always have my dessert served on a salver. if you wrote a book page on one of them, i'd eat that also! I’ll send this gem to MyPoemList before I finish the comment! - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bri's FORM FOR COMMENTING ON POEMS: [n/a = not applicable to this poem] Poem Comment Form As my shoulder I did abuse, here is what may amuse: A poem-comment “form”; I know it ain’t the norm. But if I write comments TOO long, I’ll never hear the end of the song: “Bri, I Told You, Take Care Of Shoulder; You’re Young No More & Getting Older”. So this simple form I have devised. Don’t look at me! Are you so surprised? If I use the form I MAY have more time … to read more poems with, or without, rhyme. After all, I can’t read and NOT comment, and if you must have MORE input ……….from me … send me a request ……….., though “more” AIN’T free. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Sizzling thoughts Baked in burning skulls Sliced and served In salvers white, Before starving minds! A. I enjoyed it: Yes _x_x_ ; No___ ; I’m not telling___ B. I understood it: Yes_x__; No___; I’m not sure___ C. I enjoyed the: Rhyming _n/a__; Rhythm_xx__; Originality_xx__; Cleverness__xx_; Humor/Humour_x__; Seriousness__x_; Sensuality_n/a__; Humanity_n/a__; Alliterations_xx__; Personal touch_n/a_; Other __________ D. It makes me want to read more of your poems: Yes_xx__; No___; I’m not telling___ E. The use of English was: Impeccable/good_x__; Deplorable/bad___; In between _(see above) __; No comment___ F. Could use proofreading: Yes___; No_x__; You decide___ THANKS FOR SHARING. bri :)
Wow.... this is clever and highly innovative! Really enjoyed your preface remarks..... (poem) This way you can save your shoulders! But if I write comments TOO long, I’ll never hear the end of the song: “Bri, I Told You, Take Care Of Shoulder; You’re Young No More & Getting Older”. Wonderful...... wonder fool.....! ! Thanks!