Brand New Day Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Brand New Day

Rating: 5.0


Introduction: Some days you feel alive, some days you don't...it's the elegance of life which many face in the days of existence. Through our own fray whatever it may be, we look out for a brand new way towards the light. We wander, more or less as a rabbit looking for its new home; crawling in and out within this baffled world to find serenity - To find a brand new day filled with everlasting aurora of peace and contentment.


Sometimes the sky is blue, sometimes it looks so white
Sometimes the truth hurts too, sometimes it's blinding bright
Sometimes this life feels short, sometimes it seems so long
Sometimes we go abroad, and at times we feel belonged

Sometimes we want to heal, Sometimes we just let go
Sometimes we feel so real, sometimes we feel hollow
Sometimes we don't forgive, sometimes we don’t forget
Sometimes we feel captive, and at times we do regret

Sometimes we sure wonder and pray to leave things back
Sometimes we surrender and we get back in track
Sometimes we learn to deem the truth from the lies
Sometimes we feel the change and start a whole new life

One day we see one light that brings in so much hope
It shows one true love, in a whole new view
That day may be today, reading this here and now
These words aren't just to rhyme, but to put a vivid smile

A smile which won't leave off today
As we all know it's a brand new day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevens Cadet 21 February 2012

Concept good. Rhythm good. Focal points good. You got this one on the money. The structure of how this was wrote kept me drawn in the most.

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G.Y Hammed 20 February 2012

This poem echoes vividly the concept of everything existing as opposite pairs in the universe: day&night, positive&negat, male and female, even happiness and sadness. Waking up to a brand new day everyday, we are vulnerabale to one part of this opposite throughout our deeds... Aqeeb is reliable... for sensible poems.

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Unwritten Soul 07 February 2012

Beautiful write Aqeb..Sometimes we need to wait before we fully understand what we have faced in past and sometimes we only fall but many times we need to gain from all of this pain..because like you said, tomorrow we have a brand new day..and it continues everyday_Unwritten Soul

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Ebi Robert 03 January 2012

every word you said are true. I felt this poem flow through my vein.

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