Breakfast Time Poem by Cigeng Zhang

Breakfast Time

Rating: 4.8


There is callow bird
Singing in my kitchen's flue
Attracted by the crisp sound
I squat down under the flue
Listening to the little bird
I forget to cook my food
Aha! - Nothing prepared
I taste the sweet bosom friend

Tuesday, March 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: bird loving,fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kwai Chee Low 18 March 2017

A beautiful write. Nature calling and your heart responds. There is zen in this piece.

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Cigeng Zhang 19 March 2017

So true, little birds bring us the world of very Zen. Thank you Kwai Chee.

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Christopher Tye 17 March 2017

Really nice poem, birdsong can be really engrossing to our ears.

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Cigeng Zhang 19 March 2017

I am very glad you also hear the birdsong in my little poem. Thank you Christopher.

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Daniel Brick 15 March 2017

In the church I attend there has been a recent emphasis on fasting.The purpose is to decrease ordinary habitual action to free the mind for prayer. In your poem I find a similar mental freedom: instead of a routine breakfast you followed the bird's song and it became a summons to something lovely and extraordinary. As if you were like John Keats following the sound of the nightingale. There's magic in such listening.

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Cigeng Zhang 19 March 2017

Sometimes nature beauty and lively wildlife make us forget ourselves. Thank you Daniel for sharing your nice comment.

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