xelam kan


Bride Of The Sky - Poem by xelam kan

Sleep, sleep O! Bride of the sky
Thy wakening light from hovering height
Rhyming a carol sweetly recites
that winged my fancies and passion ignite

Go now! Thy lofty looks are gone dry
As my love phrased me bye,
Once she had me closed and Conquer
All my wit and wild wild temper
When I sealed my face in her bosom
Squeezed her charm and fragrant blossom,

O bride of the sky
Come close and listen to my cry
Bring me back in this sweet July
The vanished charms of my Helen of troy.
O! Heavenly symbol of love and purity
You lead a broken love to maturity
Make me whole in love and sincerity.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

was Seated by a stream and was staring at moon

Comments about Bride Of The Sky by xelam kan

  • Gold Star - 9,761 Points Heather Wilkins (7/14/2013 8:13:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem with nice imagery. enjoyed this one (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,167 Points Unwritten Soul (6/23/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    So lovely, like a magical spill around the moon's face, a halo around it...aura of its beautiful charm..so it did dissolve you in its persona... where love glows in the darkness when night off the light, just a sphere candle that enchant the sky while kissing you with its bright..so beautifully written, as if you own it's heart settled in yours_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,012 Points Saadat Tahir (6/14/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    By far the best of yours; since i started reading your poetry
    Great visuals a lovely mythological aura is thrown around the feelings and nostalgia like a rich stole, woven with rich imagery and steeped in the air of limmerance (pardon the usage)
    Loved the old age charm imbued by archaic usage to great advantage....


    class poetry....you can be rightly proud of (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,947 Points * Sunprincess * (11/5/2012 8:45:00 PM)

    wonderful imagery..the rhyme works well..fabulous.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Reader (10/31/2012 9:24:00 AM)

    Good apostrophe to the moon! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 82 Points Jahan Zeb (10/28/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    This is another rhythmic poem with touching lines and the Allusion on Helen.
    Simply magnificent.
    Bring me back in this sweet July
    The vanished charms of my Helen of troy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (10/25/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    very beautiful imagery I like your style the beautiful omages you potray.......write more (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, June 14, 2013


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