Bridge Of Hope Poem by Asif Baloch
Bridge Of Hope
With tears I have knead the bridge of hope
don't know when the barriers will break
and flood away the dreams,
once made of clay
I did asked for happiness and smiles
stones and thorns got
a gift as destine
I did tried to reach the sky
leader of dreams was
steep and disguise
I did offered love and life
my loved ones pierced me with
the dagger of hate and lies
Tho I want to cry but, tears have forbiden me
I want to die but, death has forsaken me
Thus now I have forgotten how to smile, asif
sadness and sorrows, resides in my eyes
yes..'too much sadness and sorrow reside' inside this write...great effort, Aijaz...thanks for sharing...10
Tho I want to cry but, tears have forbiden me I want to die but, death has forsaken me Thus now I have forgotten how to smile, asif sadness and sorrows, resides in my eyes I can surely relate to this great write of yours... Times of sadness and sorrows often surround us and Asif Bhai you were able to give your sorrows true words... Thanks you for sharing it...10 +++
'Tho I want to cry but, tears have forbiden me I want to die but, death has forsaken me Thus now I have forgotten how to smile, asif sadness and sorrows, resides in my eyes '......tho i want to cry...yes i cry but no more tears.. can't bear anymore...missing someone kills me slowly...slowly brings me to the grave..graves of living dead....life is useless, i don't want this anymore....grace
Someone said our tears can moisten our inner garden, I believe that! Your poem is heartbreaking, but life has always a way out! Nice writing!
Why my friend you let the negative energy gets hold of you? You have a great talant to express your feelings in words, try to see the positive side of life as well. May happiness resides in your sensitive heart! Regards
Tho I want to cry but, tears have forbiden me I want to die but, death has forsaken me Thus now I have forgotten how to smile, asif sadness and sorrows, resides in my eyes nice write asif touching words indeed beautiful poem ++++10 anjali
what sadness is, what sorrow is, what are choice to make.. beautiful write here..
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4/26/2024 10:45:44 PM # 1.0.0.1119
nice way of putting your thoughts into verse..... I did like your bridge of hope.... primitive and basic need!