Broken Heart Poem by Asif Baloch

Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


Falling on the ground
like a clinkig glass

once I was falling in love
now I'm falling apart

no one will ever love me
it's written in my fate

Shatered into pieces
my broken heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 13 September 2008

This is a short but explicit piece of honesty. Very well put together.

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Sarah Abdullah 23 September 2008

Simple lines Full of meanings

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Marianna Jo Arolin 21 September 2008

So very sad, you 've penned it nicely...Marianna Jo Arolin

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I really liked this poem. It is fantastic. Keep it up! Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Marria Attar 15 September 2008

Beautiful piece..... :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 September 2008

Splendid piece. Reminds me a lyric in my mother tongue Telugu 'His heart was like a glass Hit by a stony hearted woman broke into shattered pieces, his blood flowed as tears' Not exactly like this...it has its own beauty akin to language. Please read my long poem BROKEN HEART and comment

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