Jameaka Shibles

Rookie (12-13-1994 / Land of Unknown Mystery)

Broke - Poem by Jameaka Shibles

You broke my heart into pieces,
But you don't care.
You've moved on,
Forgot about me.
I thought you loved me,
You held me,
Loved me,
Cared about me.
When I looked into your eyes,
You gave me a look,
A look I can and will never forget.
How could I be so blind?
You broke my heart into pieces,
But you don't care.


Comments about Broke by Jameaka Shibles

  • Silver Star - 3,723 Points Dave Walker (9/11/2011 1:04:00 PM)

    Really sad poem of love and hurt. Good write.
    May i invite you to read my poem called,
    Dreams of a child. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kieran J96 (7/21/2010 11:41:00 AM)

    people always seem to take my words! this is very powerful and gives the reader and insight into the emotion and betrayal that is this poem! well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points David Beckham (7/19/2010 12:00:00 PM)

    A powerful narrative. Evoking great visual. Great choice of words. Good poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,247 Points Unwritten Soul (7/15/2010 6:25:00 AM)

    Emotional and yet calling for sad to come...simple but so true feelings..let that feeling go...u know when ur heart shattered like a glass it still can be fixed...but it will be fixed by someone who really know how to appreciate u, why must u need to broke it again just forget it...if u let ur heart like a shattered glass so it will look shiny but not valued but u must change to be like a diamond, shiny and hard to be broken, so nobody will hurt u..but how u can transform to diamond? only u can help..Love and understand urself first and appreciate urself...u will shine as diamond...find urself because it is secret tool to win! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points * Stephen *king (7/14/2010 12:16:00 PM)

    You broke my heart into peices,
    But you don't care
    so you must be a mare..............a good poem expressing poignant emotions..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 9, 2011


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