Treasure Island

Amir Foroughi

(Tabriz)

Buried World...No World


Deceit of life so sweet to swallow
Bones of lost souls
So bitter to swallow
Me, the world and me again
No world for me again
Harbinger of nirvana near dead end
Broken widow holds no bars
No true friend
No true
No truth
No friend
No NO
Confiscated love in love of human love
Birth of death
Or death of birth
No real object
No real
No reality
No object in subject
No in
No out
No NO
No words
No message
No N
No O
No…

Submitted: Saturday, June 27, 2009

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  • Unwritten Soul (10/2/2011 3:51:00 AM)

    Amir, the world you refer to is the world is located in underground of the ocean water...I know the world in our life now is not good too.. Sweet or bitter is a choice and sometimes not a choice...If you like a sweetness find it, you may find bitter before swallow sweet my friend..Yes there's friend of true and Yes i talk something true.
    Birth of death? ? ? dont deny the life presence, coz it's still mean life of the death
    Death of birth? ? ? Definitely a life after death...you die of alive still lock in a life but different modes..Now time to say Yes Yes Yes, coz the dark world only shadowed by heartless people, raise and collapse the reign of darkness, bright all hopefulness...see you world will better and you will be king in your life, so order what you need!
    This write is not weird, it's unique...It just wonderful expression inside the emotion_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Aqeb Benazir (9/22/2011 12:42:00 PM)

    unique and weird indeed. you expressed it exaggerating the flow of the tone! I took this just like a song rather than a poem. but impressive write! ! 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    Deceit of life so sweet to swallow
    Bones of lost souls
    So bitter to swallow
    Me, the world and me again...... so lovely thought and beautifully penned.. i love it


    red mine miss i miss you and how r u? (Report) Reply

  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/28/2009 9:16:00 AM)

    Deep and expressive composition my brother...your work has understanding of the traumas that life brings...the depth to your work...is an award for those who feel alone with their pain...keep expressing....it helps (Report) Reply

  • Pink Butterfly ... (6/27/2009 8:31:00 AM)

    All poets really have their own style in writing! Well, you got a realgreat style! This one is so good! ! ! Everything is a blessing from God. As well as emptiness and sorrow! God bless! (Report) Reply

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