Amir Foroughi

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Bloody April...So Sonorous - Poem by Amir Foroughi

First yellow leaves to touch,
Too crippled to see.
I in solitary refinement much
To see if there is even tree.

Nightingale of mercy flew,
Saw my heart as pure as dew.
Prayed the lords to hold me,
Plant seeds of passion and beauty in me.

You died in skies,
Born in the earth.
Wiped all the lies,
Draw in me hearth.

April was the golden time
To see the miracle with rhyme
In your eyes my emerald goddess,
My eternal April.

October has begun,
With a goodbye to all sorrows.
The eyes you put in my head,
Brought flood of tears
With so fears
To the gods and white angels.
Come closer my bride,
Breathe our names,
Out of any fames.
When I scream for you,
Answer me with your dew.
When I beg you to hold me,
Walk to me.

October 21th,
The day of judgement.
My dying bride...

Comments about Bloody April...So Sonorous by Amir Foroughi

  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/1/2012 2:28:00 AM)

    Soulful poem but creative scene paint that makes it remarkable too. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,873 Points Pheko Motaung (5/12/2012 5:59:00 AM)

    A wonderful and majestic piece of outstanding creative imagination! Best wishes for you! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,512 Points Unwritten Soul (10/2/2011 5:38:00 AM)

    So bloody tears, you look pale in this write..lot of blood lost i know...April to October just for few months you look the most red, the blood full in heart i guess..Shed your tears dont waste the blood...Remember next year will have another April and will sure that october will never harm you again..Just let your blood stay in vessel :) Good expression my friend :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alf Hutchison (11/27/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    Amir the one who has found you and opened your eyes and brings joy to your life is the Lord Jesus Christ... I understand your poem my friend ... thank you for sharing regards Alf (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/16/2009 1:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful literary creation, young man... keep it up. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 8, 2009

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