Amir Forougi (Tabriz)

Moving write, very alive..Maybe I could hear sound of hearts cracking, with each moment of silence.

very good poem, once there is life there is always hope.

Amir, you have without doubt touched the little child in of me...

Amir Forougi ypu have without doubt touched the little child in of me...

I love your imagery and usage of words 10++++

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Hope should not have more questions

Hope should not have more questions, afraid it turn doubt...Not wrong to have hope and but high hopes make sure dont make you down if you cant tie with your reality ropes..Amir, Dont be afraid of the future dont you ever...let your hope be part of you my friend, let it be...Because when you used to live in the dark and no hope inside, will going nowhere, static and sad never ending...time to move on, time to get all freedom..dream well Amir, dont ignore it and let it have some hope may you will find a way to back home :)
..You really talented, but now you stop writing...WHY? keep new piece coming :) Go on for new emotion, bright for sure..Have a great future my friend Amir_Unwritten Soul

yet again a brilliant write. and the flow it's also very much obvious and much like a song. i like the rhymes too. well depicted! !

Hope only become visible once worked out!

The shadows and dust, will be the guidance of our next life, when this life is doomed.Good job Amir!