Castles Of Sand Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik
Castles Of Sand
Human, the wisest off spring of nature
Driven by intellect to conquer it's master,
Cowardice and cunning revolutionize,
Setting society, it's ethics and values.
Gender and affinity betwixt the opposite,
Evolved the knot n sacred bond of espousal.
Progeny and for it their love eternal,
For a while in a thick bond to them unite.
He and she, the two wheels of a family
Espouse false conceptions of love n loyalty.
Cracks in the family come to the fore
When the children evolve as separate entity.
Modern marriage, just like a sand castle
Under the strife of egos, then crumbles.
Poet and @ Ratnakar Mandlik
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Your poem gives a good message about modern marriage, brilliantly written Ratnakar.
Thank you very much Jennifer for the appreciation of the theme of my poem
Modern marriage, just like a sand castle Under the strife of egos, then crumbles.....so touching and true. Modern marriage is like a castle of sands. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10
'Under the strife of egos'! ! ! ! With the muse of the rain washing down the Castles of Sand! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
An alarming truth about the modern marriage, that hardly survives even for a short span of time. It just crumbles down like a sand castle. A pointer at the society in general and of ego, where ethics and morality has taken a back seat. Castle of sand is a remarkable poem with a strong message to the society........10
Thank you very much Madam for your comments of this alarming issue.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 1:36:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wise your look tried to justify the loneliness of human being. Enjoyed.