Jonny Brackney

Rookie (September 26th,1988 / Louisville, Kentucky)

castles underwater Poem by Jonny Brackney


white moon reflection
shivers on
a black ocean

imagine
the castles
beneath

Submitted: Sunday, February 19, 2012
Edited: Friday, February 24, 2012

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  • Rookie - 486 Points Sara Fielder (2/22/2012 8:33:00 AM)

    Jonny, I read the first few lines thinking.....la la la... this is going to be syrupy and sentimental not expecting to have to actually use my brain. What a surprise ending! 10+ (Report) Reply

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