Catch A Whisper Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Catch A Whisper

Rating: 4.5


this dream is fading quickly
in the manner of dreams
the knowledge I had in it
is gone
you are gone
only the vague impression
of your love remains
and I, like a fool
tries to remember it.
It's like trying to catch a whisper
almost as the edge of hearing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shogunoka Ledesma III 15 February 2006

well said...very subtle, fleeting, nostalgic. I like the feeling of melancholia.

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Mary Ann Najjar 15 February 2006

gosh! you let me remember that old feeling. its a short poem but you touched the readers.10 for you.

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Indiscreet Episode 15 February 2006

Yes...I know that feeling well....nicely worded

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