she told me eating
chocolate cherries
is much safer
perhaps I prefer
getting drunk drinking
in alcohol sour cherries
drinking the second
the third one would
love to share
artists might define
this drinking
as frustration eating
how quickly spirit
frustration times
slip away passing
Dedicated to Miroslava Odalovic.
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An interesting if slightly obscure write... i love the way you start with a declaration almost as if mid conversation, there is a bohemian vibe to this write which i like and a slight gung- ho attitude... i may be wrong and i hope im not taking things too literally but i believe the last part is how when we sip cherry sours (alcohol) we loose our worries... thank you for sharing and i hope i at least understood part of this piece.....