Christmas Present Poem by Elena Sandu

Christmas Present

Rating: 4.5


Your eyes, now close
open the heart
I'll send my love,
Don't froze!
Love, do never fight
just..let it be..
..Recieve..
Then, filled
don't send it back
To others,
those in need
as little present
would you try to wrap
and share it, please?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 27 July 2011

Beautiful present given with wonderful directions! Friend, I enjoyed silently reading this poem.Tone of the poem is so graceful. Marks10++++

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Kevin Carney 24 December 2010

Nicely written the anticipation felt with all its wonderment. I like the way you wrote this. Nce job.10

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Leela Devi 20 December 2010

[share it]-SHARE -is the very message of ch/mas

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