Cinquain Drifting Clouds Poem by Heather Burns

Cinquain Drifting Clouds

Rating: 5.0


Clouds
slowly drifting
across the horizon
looking for a dry
place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 11 June 2013

I like the idea behind this poem

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Wahab Abdul 12 June 2013

yes, its a marvellous poem....clouds drift to pour rain on a dry place...enjoyed it

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Babatunde Aremu 12 June 2013

Nice poem. The poem succeeded in using nature to instruct that change is divine. Seasons must always change

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Shahzia Batool 12 June 2013

that's how God's blessings search for us when we seek for his mercy!

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Patricia Grantham 11 June 2013

Short and sweet write. Clouds drifting like white cotton will suddenly turn to gray and send down much needed rain upon the dry and scorched earth. A great creation they are. Thanks.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 June 2013

Nice thought. Well expressed. Lot of drought areas need clouds that rain. Please read my poem 'Drought Go Away' when you have time. Thank you.

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