~ Éclat Trio de l'Amour ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
28 March 27,2010
Love:
Melting next
Merging then
Emerging as
Éclat Trio de l'Amour.
====
Glossary: Trio de l'Amour ~Trio of Love
======
Copyright reserved by author
Simple and sweet; shows that the best poems can be the shortest. Keep writing (:
To Hon’ble Sir Poet John ===== Thanks for your comments and question, ‘…did you mean a FRAGMENT or BRILLIANCE in the Trio of Love…’ Instead of going into lexicon meaning-debate [as it may give rise to controversy] I’d say that a words have many meaning apart from textuality …poets coin word using noetic and the then vibe …of poet …may seem bizarre as I read in one poem ‘I want to kiss your tonsil’…here tonsil if assessed textually…crash landing…joy of reading poem will be lost…may be poet wanted to touch [kiss] the bosom [symbolically used as tonsil]…loll So in the context of Fragment or Brilliance I keep it open to readers own conceptualization contextual with the poetry… Sir John I thank you again Regards Ms. Nivedita UK - Copy to Poet Sir John
Melting, merging and then emerging as the trio of love. Niv, you seem to have mastered your contemporary poetic jargon. Your work invariably borders along the realms of mysticism. Nothing else but a full 10.
Really nice simple expression. Reminds me that love is best when kept simple. Tout le jour l'amour. bonne poésie
A deep thoughtful poem....well expressed thoughts and feelings through poetry...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The birth and rebirth of love as it is one and the same with life. Mans gift to love...Loves gift to man...our gift to love eternal! ! ! Well done. Love it