Before I close the door
I need a
Closure
From you
I been lying to myself
I been lying to you
What is wrong with me
To be honest with you
The reason I am feeling like this is because what you done and how you didn't treat me with respect
You such control freak and making things way you want
When I say something, you don't even understand
You taken this the wrong way
I don't want this anymore or you
I just don't want to be around you anymore
You are sweet and then you are sour
You saying all this lies to me and I can see right through you
I'm going leave this alone
It's better to say nothing and stop contact you
I am moving on and cutting you out of my life is for the best
I finally understand and get it
I'm taking out all joy out of me and thinking about this over and over
There is other good things along the way
I'm not good with goodbyes
I just couldn't tell you what is on my mind
I am going to tear
I just couldn't do it
It make it harder on me to face you and tell you
Closure
Enunciation of love through its critical pathways and poetic emancipation of thoughts..special mention these verses as such You are sweet and then you are sour You saying all this lies to me and I can see right through you
i love this poem because it has a very deep meaning and its something we all go through at some point of time.. And its amazing you wrote this because it will give other people a chance, who are going through the same thing, to read this and get inspired to do something about it.. very good job.. When you have time please do read my new poem (One voice) .. i would really appreciate it
Nice flow with words and emotion, funny, sad and deep at the same time 'You such control freak', that cracked me up ;) great release ;)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
closure is a true life tale expertly portrayed in poetic form. well done 10/10