Christina Phan

Rookie - 0 Points (May,2,1992)

Dance In The Rain - Poem by Christina Phan

Let rain fall down
Wake me up
Wash my dreams away
I'm coming home
I just want to run out there and
Dance in the rain
Come on everyone
Do with me
We can have all fun we can
I be here waiting for you to come and
Dance in the rain
With me
Ohh yea
I just want to have fun and scream
Come and be crazy for once
Dance in the rain
I be here waiting for you
Dance in the rain


Comments about Dance In The Rain by Christina Phan

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (8/31/2009 6:12:00 AM)

    very good..................... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (8/12/2009 11:48:00 PM)

    there is joy and music in this poem...luved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (7/21/2009 7:26:00 AM)

    Excellent work here Christina my lovely....you've created an imagery diamond of a piece....you can almost feel the rain on your skin......wonderful 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dave Tanwar (7/18/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    you just stirred me with a desire to dance in the rain :)) lovely and beautiful poem :))) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (7/4/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    You make a reader hear the sound of the falling rain with this poem..and a longing to dance in it of course :) Thanks for sharing.
    Best wishes and keep on writing.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,301 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2009 8:53:00 PM)

    Let rain fall down
    Wake me up
    Wash my dreams away
    I'm coming home...dear so much worry. rain is delayed.. beautifully themed poem i like it....10

    read mine rain delay, , o, mother, papa do u know and papa u too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (6/20/2009 6:20:00 AM)

    i could hear the tuneful pitter patter of the rain in your dance-ful words thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/19/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    nice flow of ideas/words/fine theme too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/17/2009 9:37:00 PM)

    I remember the song 'im dancin in the rain' by Fred Astaire.Its like an absolution havin to dance in the rain and get wet wet wet.Nice piece Hristina. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/8/2009 7:45:00 PM)

    Love this joyful dancing poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (6/8/2009 5:23:00 PM)

    That is one great idea. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 8, 2012


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