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DOLL FOR A TERRORIST

Here is a doll for you, terrorist
Blood stained
Which was fondled by my daughter
While she was exploded by the bomb
That you planted in her school bus
Killing all her friends
In the fragment of a second
I am her doomed mother
Who happened to see
My own daughter
Exploding in to fragments
When she comes out of her school bus
In the evening in front of our home

Be happy now
For you will be released
From this dungeon
By the Government
To save the people onboard
An Aero plane
Hijacked and force landed
In another country
By your colleagues of terror
For saving you for a ransom
The government will let you go
Knowing you will kill thousands in future
With your hi tech weapons
Of terror and death
Sponsored by wealthy nations of greed

You can argue again and say
Your fight is for a cause
And you are right when you said
The religious fights kill more than wars
And the rulers mass kill
To amass wealth and power
And say it all for the sake of their country
And ethnic cleansing is to clean their country
But then we have to kill all the humans
To cleanup the whole world
Everyone wants to kill each other
That is the basic instinct of humans
Who are proud of saying
They are high above animals
While they never kill their own breed
And kill only for food

Here, take this doll
Stained by my daughter's blood
In return let me bear a child from you
In my womb
To make you realize
The feel of parental affections
When you kiss your own child
And to show you how you feel
The sprinkling of hot blood
Of your own child on your face
When I cut it to pieces in front of you
With the sharp sword of my sorrows

To make you realize
All the philosophies in this world
Cannot wipe away the sorrow you feel
When you see your own child
Being torn to pieces
To make you realize
Peace can never be attained
By tearing men to pieces
Then you will ask yourself
Hysterically ‘for whom for what
You are killing
All those innocent kids
And their fathers and mothers
And your own sisters and brothers
Whole around the world? '

Copy Right - C.N.Premkumar

Submitted: Saturday, October 09, 2010
Edited: Wednesday, February 29, 2012


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  • Pankajam K (4/19/2012 10:47:00 PM)

    Religion kills more than war. These mindless people bath in human blood. A very sensitive poem. Simple words, yet very powerful.

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  • Neetha Sasidharan (2/17/2012 5:43:00 AM)

    wow..............mindblowing poem......
    smooth flow of emotions...grt n simple use of words......grt theme.......apt title......so powerful......d sorrows n anger of a mom is clearly shown....u r really a poemhunter...

  • Nani Valadez (1/17/2012 4:10:00 AM)

    that cool nd it made me be aswsome

  • Albert Matthew (11/11/2011 10:40:00 AM)

    You are expressing the unspoken and unutterable words in the hearts of those who, powerless to prevent are the victims of the vicious cycle of violence and death sponsored by the Devil, who came to kill, steal and destroy St. John 10: 10. Only Jesus Christ [God] can and will bring an end to and punish the acts of terrorism[sponsored by sin] and reward the victims with justice and eternal life if they accept! Jesus came to give eternal, abundant life. [John 10: 10]! That will happen at the last day when 'Every knee shall bow and every tongue confess that Jesus is Lord to the glory of God, the father' Phil.2: 1-10. God bless you! Continue writing!

  • Saju Abraham (3/16/2011 3:05:00 PM)

    It's a very powerful poem full of emotions of anger, frustration, acceptance, revenge and more. It's a nice way of appealing to the terrorists. The poem is filled with the pain of a mother whose child was killed so brutally. I hope you find peace and consolation. And writing about it is one way of finding it, especially if one can write so well as you do. Thanks for sharing it.

  • Lynn Glover (11/25/2010 12:26:00 PM)

    A very beautiful poem written with compassion and love for one's child. My country has also been attack by these terrorist and with sad, sad results. Good luck to you and your family.

  • Latha Devi (11/10/2010 5:42:00 AM)

    Heart warming and touching. I can not believe it is your imagination! How beautifully you have narrated the story through the poem. No one can stop reading it fully. Who can read it without keeping their eyes wet! ! ! ? ? ?

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/18/2010 12:44:00 PM)

    ‘Of terror and death/Sponsored by wealthy nations of greed’ ~ I agree one hundred percent

    ‘The religions kill more than wars’ ~ Religion never kills but wrong interpretations by fanatics kiill

    ‘In return let me bear a child from you /In my womb’ ~ Indeed most touchy and eyes wetting lines to me … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Premkumar-ji
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

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