Pacific Ocean Poem by chloe young

Pacific Ocean

Rating: 4.8


i wish i could swim the pacific ocean and back.

and when i came back to sit in front of a burning burning fire

until it dried me to the bone.

and for my skeleton to be hung above your bed

to act as a catcher of your night terrors

and it would work

because you would know that i was magical.

because i swam the whole pacific ocean and back.

for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 16 May 2009

Not like a fast dip in the pool

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<font color=black>Nagourta 10 October 2009

: D How sweet.

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Kale Beaudry 07 July 2009

Your format variety is something that intrigues me as many, many poets don't know how to accomplish that, when in fact it is this easy... you have a way with words, and I like the images you paint in my mind. Very artistic. Very poetic. You've earned a fan.

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Nothern Cross 24 June 2009

I love the symbolic power of love that you created through the ocean. well thought of.

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Shekhar Joshi 28 May 2009

crazy about a guy who doesn't give a s**t.......duh. insanity at its best....wht more can i say

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Shy Beauty Raven 19 May 2009

this was cool. i prefer a pool myself.

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