Noemi Lee

Rookie (2006)

Commercials Make Me Cry - Poem by Noemi Lee

Commercials make me cry,
So do articles about talented men
Who, at age 44
of a massive heart attack

I'm sure I'm coming down with the flu
and you forgot the 8.2 hour anniversary
of the moment we met.
How could you?

A burned slice of pizza,
and a sad song bring a tear,
My favorite TV show is now off the air.

To you,
these things may be minimal,
but I cant help it.
I think
they are

As you can see,
this poem is a mess.
I really can't help it reader.
Just 3 letters for you
P M S.

Comments about Commercials Make Me Cry by Noemi Lee

  • Rookie Shelia Williams (9/8/2006 7:51:00 PM)

    I thought I was the only one. You have great style. Keep it up! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Valsa Terron (5/8/2006 10:42:00 PM)

    :) ..Loved it! I can relate.
    I really like your style...keep writing!

    Valsa (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 9, 2006

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