Commitment Of Guilt Poem by Buyunde Acura Sylivester

Commitment Of Guilt

Rating: 4.0


This is my diary, of what I'd done,
A moment of sorry, for this one,
Mistake I'd to learn, the whole in a story;
leaving you alone, in a city of no ivory,
I mean sorry darlin'.

Hear the siren, of a falling heart,
Stay and listen, how much it was hurt,
Carefully be on alart, to count eleven,
The hour to start, am almost to heaven.
I mean sorry darlin'.

This is the load, that I give my innocence,
Whenever I hoard, false courage to my conscience,
That with science, I can stay safe road,
Yet with pretence, I do no odd,
I mean sorry darlin'.

I apologize leaving, you in my friends' arm,
Letting you starving, hopping I no harm,
Disrespecting your alarm, ignoring your loving,
Underseeing your arm, when you were waving,
I mean sorry darlin'.

Though I gave no name, to the journey,
And denying the blame, my sweet honey,
Times 're many, you call'd I no came,
As I say am funny, you say it's no game,
I mean sorry darlin'.

Don't wanna recall, this day,
Again at all, and tomorrow is Sunday,
I'll go to pray, for my action of fall,
My tears I'll pay, saying sorry! as whole,
I mean sorry darlin'.

Forgive I, my sole,
open me eye, raise my soul,
I'll play my role, to my topmost sigh,
Me no fall again. This isn't a lie,
I mean sorry darlin'.

Sorry my angel, if not enough,
My earthly archangel, make me lough,
Please win me triumph, my dove angel,
Smile on my behalf, my archangel.
I mean sorry darlin'.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
... An apology to my love. it was a Saturday, ....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alexander Coppedge 23 March 2013

Definately emotional A good story. You have a lot of wonderful lines The way you express some of them magical This art does need work to make it sparkle You got good taste And a lot of talent

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