Treasure Island

elena winters

(august 11 / joliet illinois)

consequences and repercautions


ones soulmate can last a lifetime
but how do you know your mate if you dont have a soul
see what you hear, hear what you see
think with your head, feel with your heart
take time to embrace light in the dark
embrace youself embrace the outdoors
connect to feel the ocean waves wash upon shore
be connected mentally, physically, emotional, sexually
then you'll discover your wants and desires
never take notes from those who chose to use whats below the belt or in between the thighs to attract the opposite sex
because that can only lead to regrets
be true to yourself know whats best for you
dont let others try to control you dont take advice from the lonesome
because in the end of the situation you'll have to deal with the

CONSEQUENCES AND REPACAUTIONS

Submitted: Saturday, October 11, 2008
Edited: Monday, October 13, 2008

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  • Abraham de La Torrre (11/28/2008 3:53:00 AM)

    I'm at work, Breeze Breeze, so won't be able to give a thorough appraisal of your poetry. I read through Repercautions (liked the intended pun) and will comment on it later. Then, when I have more time, I'll read on. So far, I like what I saw. (Report) Reply

  • Viola Grey (10/25/2008 11:44:00 PM)

    'but how do you know your mate if you dont have a soul '.......

    you reeled me in with that line alone....am very much enjoying your work (Report) Reply

  • Tai Chi Italy (10/11/2008 2:43:00 PM)

    I think that is purr cushion...purr sonaly I think those who have it, just can't help but show that....it is chemistry that attracts in my huge experience of one husband for 23 years...love is love and needs all you suggest to thrive, but even without some of them, love always survives...again in my experience...A thought provoking read, Tai, waving her beautiful butt at you! lol just jesting not gay! (Report) Reply

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