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'Cos You’re Gone

I feel like a song without the words.
A bird without its wings.
A man without his soul.
A heart without a home.

I feel like a man who has lost his mind.
A youth who has lost his dreams.
A king who has lost his crown.
A knight who has lost his sword.

I feel like a ship beneath the waves.
A child who‘d lost his way.
A night without the stars.
A sky without the sun.

You were the smile on my face.
The joy in my heart.
The dreams in my mind.
The sun in my day.
But now you’re no more.

No words conceived can describe,
No words written can convey;
How I feel, how it hurts, how much I missed you.
Cos I wish you’re here, in my life again.
For when you’re in my arms, I feel I’m home.

Though many years had past,
Since you’re gone.
Though many suns had set,
Since you’re gone.
It hurts still, like its yesterday
But I know someday,
We’ll be together again

Submitted: Tuesday, March 01, 2011
Edited: Saturday, March 05, 2011


Comments about this poem ('Cos You’re Gone by Dave Ben'Dafe )

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  • Louis Cecile (3/7/2011 2:23:00 AM)

    Great piece. I nice consistent rhythm to the flow of the poem. Good use of language and similes.

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  • Wendy Thopliss (3/5/2011 12:04:00 PM)

    Dave this is a lovely poem, i really enjoyed it. well done.

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