Creed Poem by Rachel Butler

Creed

Rating: 4.0


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)


Companionship love atwene?

'No'

Nullity is determined ay for me.


Sparrow

Thursday, February 9, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard McClellan 09 February 2012

Shorter than a Haiku. LOL Companionship does repel nothingness, thats for sure. Nice Poem.

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Dave Walker 09 February 2012

Very short but very sweet, a great poem.

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Marieta Maglas 15 February 2012

A complex philosophical love poem.Thank you for sharing.

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Raymond Farrell 20 July 2015

Couldn't be any more straight forward but the undercurrents are more complex.

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Marvin Brato 06 October 2013

Wise write! Liked it.

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James Mclain 10 May 2013

If even a cloud Even a bird in flight Flies out of sight.......iip

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Fragments Of Light And Love 27 February 2012

precisely, words much many or more...do not determine the truth behind another words unspoken...

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Danny Draper 23 February 2012

Well, it's certainly short but no doubt the meaning and feelings are contrary.

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