Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,115 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Cry Baby - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Cry baby cry
open your mothers eyes
don't lose your life
because of her downward slide

Cry baby cry

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A sad but true story.

Comments about Cry Baby by Dave Alan Walker

  • Freshman - 699 Points Guy Lip-more (12/6/2012 2:06:00 PM)

    Short and powerful, great write as normal. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (10/5/2012 6:04:00 AM)

    So sweet....I just got my first grandchild a month back! ! am missing her...a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (10/2/2012 2:49:00 AM)

    So poignant, just a few words that mean so much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Herojit Philem (9/30/2012 12:05:00 AM)

    Short but conveys good meaning....! ! ! ! Cry baby cry.. Nice opening (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (9/29/2012 2:29:00 PM)

    perhaps then in the whimper of the child lies the key to the mother's heart... let us hope! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,727 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/28/2012 8:35:00 AM)

    Though short, you have given the right to the babies! Nice! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 27, 2012

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