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Cry Baby

Cry baby cry
open your mothers eyes
don't lose your life
because of her downward slide

Cry baby cry

Submitted: Thursday, September 27, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A sad but true story.

Comments about this poem (Cry Baby by Dave Alan Walker )

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  • Guy Lip-more (12/6/2012 2:06:00 PM)

    Short and powerful, great write as normal.

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  • Spiritual Seeker (10/5/2012 6:04:00 AM)

    So sweet....I just got my first grandchild a month back! ! am missing her...a 10.

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  • Heather Wilson (10/2/2012 2:49:00 AM)

    So poignant, just a few words that mean so much.

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  • Herojit Philem (9/30/2012 12:05:00 AM)

    Short but conveys good meaning....! ! ! ! Cry baby cry.. Nice opening

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  • Eric Cockrell (9/29/2012 2:29:00 PM)

    perhaps then in the whimper of the child lies the key to the mother's heart... let us hope!

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/28/2012 8:35:00 AM)

    Though short, you have given the right to the babies! Nice!

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