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Last night I went out once again
To ply my ancient trade.
I've seldom heard a word of praise
For all the love I've made.
Sometimes I find it oh so hard
To do my joyful task.
I might explain it all quite well,
If those who love would ask.
But few have ever dared to care
How love can go astray.
Most accept their lover's fate
When love just fades away.
So here it is for all to hear,
How love has been till now.
Sometimes I just don't aim so well,
I miss a heart somehow.
I have to hit two hearts at once.
It's timing, don't you see.
And sometimes lovers close their heart.
To all, especially me.
If someone ever gave you love,
I hope you'll give just due;
To me, the one who made it so,
The joy that came to you.
Perhaps you closed your heart that time.
Perhaps I missed the mark.
Perhaps I timed it oh so bad
It only made a spark.
And if you came to love somehow,
And theirs was not the same.
Or even if they turned from you,
Then I'm the one to blame.
Yes, I'm to blame for all crossed love
That came to be so blue.
But please don't curse me oh so much,
I have some feelings too.
I'm sorry for mistakes I've made.
I'd surely take them back.
If only I could give you all
The love in life you lack.
But if you'll give me one more chance.
I'll follow every lead.
And promise to keep at my work
To find the love you need.
And when I do, I'll string my bow,
And line my arrow true.
And then the world will see once more
What Cupid still can do.
GREENWOLFE 1962
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Saturday, January 10, 2009 |
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Sunday, November 14, 2010 |
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Comments about this poem (Cupid
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C. P. Sharma (3/3/2010 12:07:00 AM)
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Awesome poem, skilfully crafted with arrow aimed in perfect line. I loved,
And when I do, I'll string my bow,
And line my arrow true.
And then the world will see once more
What Cupid still can do.
Confident ardent love.
CP
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Saadat Tahir (7/16/2009 6:41:00 AM)
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very well written... an ardent wish... less likely granted by providence... ;)
vivid crisp and fresh like the rustling pines
cheers
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Cristy Upshaw (5/29/2009 3:44:00 PM)
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this is so awesome. I love the imagery you have portrayed. your mind of so far beyond mine. such greatness your words leave on pages.
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Laurie Hill (2/6/2009 10:00:00 AM)
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Couldn't you get a ''Gatling'' bow? : 0)
An excellent read
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Catrina Heart (2/4/2009 8:48:00 PM)
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Love is sweeter the second time around...if only given the chance to make things right...How humble you are to admit that you are the one who have to be blamed from the crossed roads that turned you to blue...Truely heartfelt for a great man accepts his mistakes..........beautiful poem written with fine rhymes too...10/10
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Lina Depina (2/1/2009 6:41:00 PM)
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this poem is very well written... i love this poem
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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) (1/22/2009 3:02:00 PM)
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OMG! ! ! ! ! this is my fave of urs so far! ! ! ! keep writing i enjoy it
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Catrina Heart (1/22/2009 10:04:00 AM)
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Great and awesome poem Wolfy! So heartfelt yet written very nicely in a poetic verses...A cupid who wants to have a second chance to coup up all the lost times...Loved it.10+++
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Lynda Robson (1/20/2009 9:10:00 AM)
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Excellent Wolfey, expressive and good rythm,
10
Lynda xx
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