GREENWOLFE 1962

Rookie (MARCH 23, 1951)

I'Ll Die Loving You - Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

When I wake in early morn,
Each time the day is new.
I thank the Lord that you were born,
As I'll die loving you.

As I sit alone and pray
And cling to love so true,
I'll hope to see you once today
As I'll die loving you.

When I see the stars at night,
I wonder if you do.
And hope they have us both in sight
As I'll die loving you.

When I take my final rest,
This day, if life is through;
I'll thank the Lord I lived so blessed
That I died loving you.


Comments about I'Ll Die Loving You by GREENWOLFE 1962

  • Rookie Cristy Upshaw (6/3/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    stunning, touching words you have conveyed. it often seems when we are in love that one would die loving the other person and then so many yrs go by and another comes along and changes everything. loved the write, very powerful and filled with raw emotions. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie John Lyday (4/6/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    There's an honesty to this poem that grips you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hadyn Rodriguez (3/15/2009 7:21:00 PM)

    you tell so much bout love its great i wish i could have that (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jaci Burns (3/12/2009 11:43:00 AM)

    very well wrote i love it

    9* (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jade Hymora (2/26/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    This has to be one of the most beautiful things I've read in a while. Your writing is simply lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Corey Campbell (BlackChild) (2/24/2009 4:49:00 PM)

    Man.... 'GREAT'. Again, I really like your style. This would be great in a book! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Little Hatila ;) (2/18/2009 4:18:00 PM)

    'When I take my final rest,
    This day, if life is through;
    I'll thank the Lord I lived so blessed
    That I died loving you.'

    wow...just don't know what to say...very beautiful...

    Hataw (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (2/11/2009 1:52:00 PM)

    really nice poem and very much loving....its full of nice expressiond and feeling.really nice creation (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 78 Points Maia Padua (2/9/2009 10:31:00 PM)

    I'LL DIE LOVING YOU...such a wonderful love expressed in this poem..
    .one and true love...ETERNAL LOVE....
    how sweet and divine are the words...engraved in my mind and heart as i read along with the written lines...
    lines that would captivate the eyes of the reader...
    words and thoughts enough to melt a heart...even a heart made of steel....
    10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Evaughn Gray (2/9/2009 9:52:00 PM)

    i smiled the whole time reading this poem, it's a 100! it was utterly amazing! ! ! ~Love Hazel G.E (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sunflower Field (2/7/2009 8:04:00 PM)

    I really liked that poem nice job! It's very sweet glad to read it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/6/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    What could i say about this except its awesome composition....Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madison Yeater (2/2/2009 12:30:00 PM)

    awww..i LOVE this poem. its perfect and your wording is great, and explains the true devotion to loving another you truly care for. i love the line 'i died loving you.' just as much as this:
    Till death do us part
    you'll always be in my heart

    good job.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lina Depina (2/1/2009 6:46:00 PM)

    i love this poem... i love the way you write, it feels like im seeing into ur heart reading this poem...i love these lines it made a perfect ending
    When I take my final rest,
    This day, if life is through;
    I'll thank the Lord I lived so blessed
    That I died loving you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Amber Swiney (1/30/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    Very good, i like your style (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pampero Jadan (1/22/2009 4:59:00 PM)

    wonderful poem, it like a morning melody i guess the one u love if she read it she will die loving
    true passions rhymed well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Laila lili (1/18/2009 10:05:00 AM)

    nice and great feelings........
    well me too i will die reading your poems
    keep it up
    layla (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 329 Points Marilyn Lott (11/29/2008 9:05:00 AM)

    So loving and beautiful! A love that endures is the best love of all. Just wonderful and is a definite '10! '

    Best Wishes,
    Marilyn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (11/27/2008 4:20:00 PM)

    This was very beautiful
    Sweet, loving, clear, and beautiful
    Well done
    I give it a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie DAZZLIN DNA (11/18/2008 5:15:00 PM)

    AWESOME............. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, October 6, 2008


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