Daisies by Viola Grey

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Daisies

If I chose this rocky path
then why do I fight
to walk through fields
of plush daisies.

You say I desire pain
and walk away from love,
but I opened the gate
you failed to find.
So, who then is to blame?

I'm only ever going to be
who I want them to see,
that person you're seeking
is a reflection of your mind.

I shall walk in the light,
shadows chill my glow
and I'll always be searching
for that glorious field
of plush daisies.

1/10/08

Viola Grey

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Who Iam (10/15/2008 5:32:00 PM)
Much thought and sensitivity within these lines young lady.
The metophores of a rocky path, a field of daisies, and you
opening the gate, makes me feel someone's heart was broken along the way.
Hopefully they have found a different path full of sunflowers and sunshine!
Well done.

Rehan Hyder (10/15/2008 1:13:00 AM)
for that glorious field
of plush daisies..... nay the relections of your mind

..... the narcissist in your head

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Viola Grey (Feb '73 / NZ)