When I look into your eyes, I see their light.
Our relationship seems to be indestructible.
I give myself to you, and I hold you so tight.
Being with you, our dreams are achievable.
We are together to explore our perfect universe,
Because together we can prevail in everything.
We are one being seemingly living in reverse.
You fulfill my desire, and you get my heart on a string.
When you penetrate me, I become another being.
You take everything from me to give me everything.
It is like a dawn of our souls, another awakening.
We love each other so much, we feel like exploding.
It is a connection between the heart, the soul, and the body.
We dance our feelings, our tears, our thoughts, and our passion.
Dancing in the rhythm with stars, our love we need to embody.
Dance is deep, intricately intertwined, the impetus of our vision.
Ecstatic moments are rumbles of our minds and our souls.
We swallow each other; it is like madness
And like a naturally flowing rhythm of our existence to feel
Every part of our molecular structure relieves the sadness.
We understand the language of our bodies having polar reactions.
Without you, I'm like a little star losing its mass and its rays.
When I'm with you, your love enhances me and gets me in a trance.
We become two souls dancing our love dance in the same clay.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
MARI - ARE YOU TRYING TO TELL US SOMETHING THROUGH YOUR REPETITION OF THIS PERFECT POEM? - YOU MUST BE COMPLETELY IN LOVE TO WRITE LIKE THIS. IT IS BEAUTIFUL - THANK YOU. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X (A poetic kiss for a perfect Poetess)
It is a connection between the hearts, the soul and the body We dance our feelings, our tears, our thoughts and our passion. Dancing in rhythm with stars, our love we need to embody Dance is deeper, intricately intertwined, the impetus of our vision. sweet..very sweet..the techncalities of poems and the idea makes me think because your subjects are alwas new and innoveation is found..good vision..enjoyed it and read few time..each time it has giveb me sort of new pleasure..really a good poet you are and you romantic vision is heart touching one..well done
a beautiful poem on science of love.the last para is really wonderfull 'We understand our bodies language, with polar reactions in this romance Being without you, I'm like a little star, losing its mass and its ray But when I'm with you, your love enhances me and get me in trance And we become two souls dancing the love dance in the same clay.' voted10 surya
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A perfect love dance in which the dancer disappears and only love remains. I specially loved, When you penetrate me I become another being You take everything from me and give me everything It is like a dawn of our souls, another awaking We love each other so much, we feel like exploding CP