indulge my observation
while fusion warms the days
counting micro-Einsteins
(sounds funny to say)
with sunlight overhead
my instrument won't play
excuse me, please
but can't you see
you're standing
in my rays?
Nice write here Charles, and wonderful you need the suns rays to keep your instruments playing, fine imagery here.
Chuck, So, the sun is out and I am casting a shadow ? ... sorry! B.V.A.
Photo-buff, are we? Long time ago, for me. Great description of the inherent frustrations of the hobby! A quite photogenic poem, Chuck. : ]
Very well constructed. Not everyone is able to perform such delights with the shorter style of poetry.
I think you have a real talent for these short poems. You're able to say so much within such a small space....that's not easy to do. Sincerely, Mary
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Cute. Short by very sweet. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX