Dawn Shatters Poem by elysabeth faslund

Dawn Shatters

Rating: 5.0


The sun harbors no mystery today.
It rises timidly, rampantly,
like shattered crystal, on Earth.
Rabbits shake shards from fur.

The ocean glows as never before.
Each wave reflects as heraldic.
With reflections, it honors
all life, all time, all genre.

Let poets continue this reflection
in their work.
Let today dawn as new, with promise
of greatness.

Shores wait, un-walked.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 07 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Elysabeth. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Mark Heathcote 08 October 2014

I like this poem with its renewed landscape crystal freshness. Like a call artists to rediscover it and redefine. Nice one.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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