elysabeth faslund

Rookie (11/23/49 / Thibodaux. Louisiana)

.........................Dawn Song - Poem by elysabeth faslund

May this dawn dry all your tears,
that were cried just yesterday.
May this dawn be joyous bright,
chasing all your cares away...

The Night has gone, bearing all
to the realm of stillness...

Now come here, come here...
I will wait for you.


Comments about .........................Dawn Song by elysabeth faslund

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/11/2012 7:34:00 PM)

    Wow! What powerful and well crafted write that clearly shows your great poetic writing skills and beauty filtered through this touching write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I really enjoyed this great write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (10/14/2009 10:51:00 PM)

    a lovely song welcoming dawn.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 408 Points Patti Masterman (8/26/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    Love your beautiful dawn song. (smile) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2009



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