John Hazon Palen

Rookie - 0 Points (February 3,1995 / Philippines)

Daydreamer - Poem by John Hazon Palen

I am on the passenger side,
Daydreaming to the sky
The day's bright and full of life.. then
In a mile, I caught your sight

My heart starts beating triple times
The thing that I don't know why
And the bus stopped for a while
Not long you're in the seat behind

The music starts playing love songs
I get notion to have conversation
I love your eyes put in my direction,
I find my heart set in motion

We talk and talk while the road seems stretched,
The time runs slow till I reached my place
All was fantasy, I never noticed,
You wake me up, all eyes on my face.

(I wrote this poem from an experience when I was in a bus and caught sight of another passenger who had me wonderstruck! Well, other than that, I also have a deeper meaning with this poem!)


Comments about Daydreamer by John Hazon Palen

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/15/2013 12:29:00 AM)

    John Hazon Palen i loved your poem. you should have approached her buddy. just as two poems are never alike, two bus rides..... hey dont miss the next time please. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/15/2013 12:28:00 AM)

    John Hazon Palen i loved your poem. you should have approached her buddy. just as two poems are never alike, two bus rides..... hey dont miss the next time please. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points John Hazon Palen (3/16/2012 1:51:00 AM)

    Thank you, everyone! ; ')
    God bless! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 478 Points Ency Bearis (3/16/2012 12:06:00 AM)

    Nice poem to ponder, great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenna Chryste (3/15/2012 4:57:00 PM)

    this happened to me yesterday except the person beside me woke me up :) i'm still a kid, yes, and am in high school - me and my daydreams :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Varna Soyakaze (3/15/2012 12:39:00 AM)

    Very good poem.
    Reminds me of one of my experiences.
    The passenger's lucky enough to talk to someone who would write a poem on her. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,879 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (3/15/2012 12:07:00 AM)

    Good poem, John; keep writing and sharing! You were lucky to find this co-passenger just as interested... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kody Pound (3/14/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    That's a great Poem! You got talent kid. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/2/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    beautiful poem, i really enjoy it) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amatulla Mohammadi (2/16/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    a nicely written poem :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 8, 2012


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