Morticians paint
the lips of corpses.
Enbalmers inject
mammal pieces made into
cold cuts with sodium nitrate
dyes.
and dead
churches paint
their exterior
while inside..
the words of Jesus
about peace
are ignored.
The ideas intrigue me. I would rework stanzas 2 and 4. Same ideas (good ones) , different word choice? ? I hope you don't take offense. These are just the kind of comments I would welcome to help me improve my poems.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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